Draft #2

Here is draft #2. As you will see I have made quite a few changes. Please let me know what you think. I am trying to use the whole song, so if you have any thoughts as to what I can add to the video, it would be greatly appreciated!

Draft #1

This is the beginning of the video. There is still quite a bit of work to be done, but it will give you a bit of an idea as to the direction I am going with it. I have some more to add and I need to adjust the timing and some of the wording etc. Please let me know if you have any suggestions!